Analysis of A night in the stars

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Glimmering floor in glimmering air
The stars are out everywhere
In the light I touched your hair
And love was scattered everywhere
Everyone saw how beautiful - your smile
Elegant as a gift perfectly boxed up for a while
Then opened with ease to a hand so gentle
A glitter globe of us holding each other
Hips popped like bubbles of champagne laughter
Here-ever I'd marry you and swerve our hearts disaster
Magician in the stars you are my grand master


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Poetic Form
Metre 100101001 011110 0011111 0111010 101110011 10010110011101 11011101110 01011110110 1111010110 110110101101010 010001111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 450
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 367
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Written on February 24, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 23, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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