Analysis of Irelands lament

Paul Marauder 1962 (Belfast)



I watched you climb into the ring
for the last time,
You were all washed up and past
your prime

Long gone was your speed and flair
your matinee looks and pompadour
hair

Gone was your smiling eyes and
cheeky grin your body now all twisted
and thin

Alas you quickly run out of fuel
your body not ready for the duel

Slumped and exhausted on your
stool your lungs exhale a mournful
brool

Counted out on a hard cold floor
your broken body could take no
more

No one heard your rattle grasp or
pulled you from the reapers grasp

You slip away without resistance
all alone cold and listless


Scheme XAXA BCB XXX DD CDD CXC CX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 1011 1011101 11 1111101 11010100 1 1111010 1011101110 01 0111011110 1101101010 1001011 11101010 1 10110111 11010111 1 11111011 111011 110101010 1011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 603
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

It’s about a Belfast boxer called Paul Ireland. He sadly died a few years ago. It’s his last fight with life with the kitchen being the ring where died alone. He was my friend too.

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Written on September 07, 2021

Submitted by pauljoe77 on February 19, 2023

Modified by pauljoe77 on July 12, 2023

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