Analysis of Lessened

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



A little lessened here.

The times and seasons shared

The walks together

Words of wisdom heard.

She slowly drifted far

But distant memories held

The limbs would fail

The eyes would dull.

Still inner joys had thrilled.

...A little lessened ours

But she no loss would feel

One seamless moment

But yonder hers so real.

The loved ones faithful, firm

With all the sighing past

Yes, my Mother

And treasures years amassed.

Bev Blair, 1926-2022


Scheme X X A X X X X X X X B X B X C A C X
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 010101 01010 11101 110101 1101001 0111 0111 110111 0101010 111111 11010 110011 011101 110101 1110 010101 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 505
Words 110
Sentences 9
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on September 15, 2022

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 15, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 15, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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