Analysis of Treading the Backwater

Jeffrey Powell 1979 (Pittsburgh, PA)



Fear
drowns us
the rising
depths consume us
But with patience we're resuscitated
Never stop swimming  - a promise to keep
whether it is
shallow or
we're in
deep


Scheme ABCBDEFGHE
Poetic Form Tetractys 
Metre 1 11 010 1011 111010100 1011001011 1011 101 10 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 160
Words 29
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on February 12, 2023

Submitted by JokerGem on February 13, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jeffrey Powell

A bit of an introvert, Jeffrey enjoys arranging words and dabbling in poetic forms as an outlet for expressing his thoughts, feelings, and observations. He tends to play by his own rules and darts in and out of the civilized world, as avoiding the conventional gathering is more his style. Jeffrey lives with his fraternal twin whom he enjoys sharing a laugh with at the opportune time. more…

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