Analysis of Hog Farming Remembered

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



It was Summer and

We were taking traditional

Trip to Danforth Farm.

Mom’s best friend

Had a Brother raising hogs

Three boys and Nadine.

The picnic Wizard.

So much food would

Stuff nine truckers.

Big smiles on their faces.

Now pigs. Bill did it all.

Disposing of dead piglets

Decision for marketing

Slaughter, price timing.

(and city folk think

farmers are slow-witted. Hah.)

After the feast, parents

Cleared for Poker and gaity.

Kids hiked the shimmering

Fields of corn.

Assembled at the pig compound

To whip cobs, like stones

At the livestock.

Specially the big gluttons

Eager for the corn cobs

Who squealed and pushed

Weaker ones to the side

Like freight trains.

Slept all the way home.

We kids did.


Scheme A X X X X X X X X X X X B B X X X A B X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form Etheree  (43%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 11100 10100100 11101 111 1010101 11001 0110 1111 1110 111110 111111 0101110 0101100 10110 01011 1011101 100110 111001 110100 111 01010110 11111 101 1000110 101011 1101 101101 111 11011 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 820
Words 179
Sentences 17
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on February 12, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 12, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 12, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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