Analysis of A pond is my place. Solace.

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Ice covers it now.
Sometimes so grey
Other times sun sparkling.
Willows droop over.
Despondent at the
Hiatus in relationship.
In frogs peeping.
Mallards courting
Or leading a string of tiny ones.
Monarchs enrapt in their
Pre migration dance.
Flying whimsically.
I come any season.
Any wardrobe, weather.
I must have that solace
My kids called it the Duck Pond.
Also remembering
Them in visiting.
How they teamed up, laughed
Ventured.
Now those little ones have grown.
Departed.
I stand alone, dreaming.
But not quite alone.
And that is more
Than worth it.


Scheme ABCDEFCCGHIJKDLMCCNOPQCPRS
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 0111 101110 1110 01010 0100010 0110 1010 110011101 1101 10101 10100 111010 10110 111110 1111011 100100 10100 11111 10 1110111 010 110110 11101 0111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 556
Words 111
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 442
Words per stanza (avg) 93

About this poem

Solitude, necessary. Nature and God and memories near.

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Written on February 09, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 09, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 09, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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