Analysis of Kelly's poem



Kelly’s poem
When I look into your eyes I get lost
You are beautiful on the outside but the beauty on the inside is what pulls me close to you
When you laugh and smile it makes you glow it melts my heart and makes me never want to let go
There’s been a connection so strong since the day that we met you're my soulmate I'm sure but sometimes you forget
How good it feels when we’re together and there's not a worry in this world I wish you felt that way all the time and always be my girl
But for now we’re just friends maybe one day we’ll fall back in love swim with dolphins and travel the world still putting at initials in the sand while sitting under the sun
The belly laughs the crying the jokes we have so much fun growing old together bickering calling me a dick-head poking your finger up my bum
I got you always.
Michael


Scheme ABCDEFGAHI
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1010 1110111111 111001011101010011111111 1110111111111011101111 1100101110111111111101101 11111001001101001111111110101111 11101110111110111100100111010100011101001 0101010011111110101010010101110110111 1111 10
Characters 843
Words 168
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 656
Words per stanza (avg) 165

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A poem to the goal who always has my heart

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Written on January 18, 2023

Submitted by michael-sloane on January 18, 2023

Modified on March 26, 2023

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