Analysis of I Am He



I Am He

I am he
the he who prevents me from being
the kind and gentle man
society both heeds and yet shuns

yes indeed
I am he

It is because
I am angry
and oftentimes a cantankerous one
who decrees the values of yesteryears
smiting the present generation's
insanities
catastrophies
atrocities

I am he
walking amongst those who
blend God with well meaning justifications called sin

yes indeed
I am he

the one who seems to have
an opinion about everything
calling a spade a spade
a brother a brother
a heathen a heathen
a wolf in sheep's clothing

calling out those who
sit before the stage
yielding nothing more than
rotten and useless fruit
with crowns and hands raised

yes indeed
I am he

so where does this leave me
within these final days
do my decrees equate to finishing well

I think not

how Lord do I obey thee
how do I love lambs and sheep
who both praise and deny thee

but aren't we all
broken and misunderstood temporaries
within the convenient or abiding wisdoms we choose
making headway down either
narrow or broadened paths

yes indeed
I am he
we are we
exactly or far adrift from the whom
God created us to be

according to the Good Book


Scheme A Abcd EA xafddddg Ahx EA xbxifb hxcxx EA axx x axa xgxix EAaxa x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 011011110 010101 010011011 101 111 1101 1110 010001001 10101011 1010010 1 1 0100 111 100111 111110001011 101 111 011111 10100110 100101 010010 010010 010110 10111 10101 101011 100101 11011 101 111 111111 011101 11010111001 111 1111011 1111101 1110011 11011 100001100 0100101010111 101110 101101 101 111 111 0101101101 1010111 0101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,171
Words 237
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 8, 3, 2, 6, 5, 2, 3, 1, 3, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This poem discusses the goins of a man who has come to terms with his identity or lock thereof.

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Written on November 29, 2022

Submitted by firstcorinthianslove on January 01, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Michael A. Hernandez

I am a professional counselor in private practice for another 20 years. I have witnessed vast personality types and realize that humanity can justify anything within their heart. I have been riding for over 40 years and I'm always amazed at the power and strength of the human heart. Having said that, I have also witnessed the grand love and the grand tragedy as a result. more…

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