Analysis of Her Scars



As she lays there in the dark, not a peep in the air, no movement, as daylight begins to start..she thinks about her scars, her pain, her losses...through all the rain she has carried she has never imagined any gains....As she lifts her body to stand up, she remembers her dad telling her be strong, standup like a man....all the demands she followed.....all the ache she swallowed....as her heart turns hollow, she stands up and pushes out a smile..she thinks "wow", it's been a while....she has walked miles in her pain and as she looks at her scars, all she can think about is the dark and the marks it has made....Today is a new day...as she begins to pray....her scars she try's to explain, what can she possibly say.....As she wishes and prays to be set free.... she remembers that her scars will never go away....As she starts to lay back down; she asks the Lord to just take her far.....All she wants is to see the stars....nothing will erase her scars!!..


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Characters 965
Words 188
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 711
Words per line (avg) 173
Letters per stanza (avg) 711
Words per stanza (avg) 173

About this poem

I wrote this poem because of the scars woman carry and the effect it has had on me and my life, my family, overcoming a situation is huge to me.

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Written on January 10, 2023

Submitted by amanda.valdezparker on January 10, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Amanda ValdezParker

Hi- I am Amanda I am 40 yrs old I grew up in Colorado in the mountains well actually in the city,, today I live here still and I enjoy spending time with my family , my children and writing is something that I have always enjoyed throughout my life. more…

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