Analysis of Forever apart



The depths of my soul that cease in deep waters are a fluent reflection of a consistent impression. Wailing me with a sequence of how I am dying inside. Companionship made with the notion of my heart senses in an undulating emotion, leak from my duct. I'm made for you as a soft place to fall, frail and fashionably sensitive. Though when you cross my mind I compete against the thrashing of what I've lost. You can compare me to a deep sea of blue with the saddest harmony playing. It serves a dejected remorse of pain crying out. The buoyancy rendering in my heart, the rise and fall of needing you, baby, vend my sails with sorrow. I'm just too far apart from myself and imposed with a heavy loneliness. I try not to think about what could have been but the past invades my beating vessel. I know if I were yo look in your eyes they would show an endurance of fulfillment that was and what you say when you say nothing at all. With what was then though we have taken different roads, still exist. It was no accident me finding you. We can't go back again and there's no use given in. As of now I can't believe how deeply sprung the Waters of you inside my heart, are. I hold everything with every beat that throbs in me, forever apart.


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Words 236
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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Letters per line (avg) 973
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About this poem

The dwelling spot most engaged with an eternal reference to a broken record, the heart and its condolences for a love.

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Submitted by volneralan449 on January 10, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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