Analysis of Croquet

Alice Guerin Crist 1876 (Clare Castle) – 1941 (Toowoomba)



In a garden where the may made the straggling fences gay
And the roses cream and scarlet shed their petals on the breeze
Your maiden aunts and I, and you, demure and shy,
Played a sober game of croquet underneath the spreading trees.

Just beyond the garden wall we could hear the merry call
Of the tennis players yonder, flitting gaily in the sun,
But we recked not of their glee, for all too content were we,
And we weren’t flushed and heated when our quiet game was done.

What a picture sweet you made! As you rested in the shade,
Listening to my eager chatter with a glance of grave surprise;
Was it nectar, love, or tea that your white hands poured for me
In the dainty Wedgewood tea-cups that were bluer than your eyes?

Love I know not; this I know, that we parted years ago –
That our paths lie far asunder in the giddy whirl of life,
And the tender vows we made, underneath the spreading shade,
Are a memory half forgotten ‘mid the city’s toil and strife.

But when wearied by its din, by its ceaseless strife and sin,
My thoughts will wander backwards at the close of some long day,
Once again I see you stand with your mallet in your hand,
‘Twixt a nodding scarlet rose-bush and a hedge of snowy may.

And the scent of mignonette comes to haunt and thrill me yet
While your blue eyes light the distance with a half reproachful smile;
Love, it is the world sad way, just to worship for a day-
And I doubt if you remember, after all this weary while.


Scheme ABXB XCDC EFDF XGEG XAXA XHAH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 0010101101101 001010101110101 110101010101 10101101010101 10101011110101 101010101010001 11111111111001 011101011010111 10101111110001 1001110101011101 11101111111111 00101111010111 11111111110101 1101110100010111 0010111010101 101001010101101 11101111110101 11110101011111 10111111110011 101010110011101 001111110111 1111101010111 11101111110101 011110101011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,451
Words 279
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alice Guerin Crist

Alice Guerin Crist was an Australian poet, author and journalist. more…

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