Analysis of Cold



Stealing along a darkened road; it’s path crooked
Fleeting around trees, leaves shivering in its wake, grass frozen mid-bow in homage
Inspecting, watchful, it’s purpose clear
A lone traveler comes; hungry for warmth
A house in the darkness; to the porch, peeking into windows; a door ajar
Cold sees an opportunity
Leaning in like a party guest offering unwanted advice, seizing the moment to enter
Quickly occupying every nook and cranny; nesting, rooting,
Inching forward through every carelessly cracked window, down every open chimney flue
Seeping along the floor, hugging corners
Inspecting cupboards, trying on boots and gloves
Filling closets and testing bed sheets; searching
Halting in a darkened corner, cold utters a sigh; glittery breath frosting windows in the vacant night
Uninvited visitor, unwelcome guest in the quiet
Faintly, the sound of voices tug at the fringes of its weary consciousness;
Lights flicker on interrupting its blue reverie; the rising sound of laughter assaults it’s crude senses
Suddenly feeling exposed, resolve melting, Cold hurriedly gathers it’s things, shoulder’s its frosty rucksack, and dissolves into the baseboards and walls, hiding
Whispering down halls, tendrils collecting its belongings along the way, cold escapes out the door as a warm body enters, door shut rudely at it’s back
Indignant and disheveled, Cold collects itself, shrugs its pack into place, and starts once again down the road trailing winter behind it


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Poetic Form
Metre 100101011110 10011110001111011010 010101101 0110011011 0100101011001100101 1110100 100101011000100110010110 1010010010101010 10101100100110110010101 1001011010 01010101101 10100101110 10001010110011001101000101 01010001010010 1001110110101110100 1101010111000101110011110 100100101101100101110110100101010110 1001110101010010110110110110101110111 010001010101111011011011011010011
Characters 1,479
Words 230
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 63
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,199
Words per stanza (avg) 228

About this poem

Inspired when the inside of our trailer kept freezing one winter. The ever-advancing ice patches on the walls made it begin to seem as if it was a battle between us and an entity trying to get in and take over.

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Written on October 06, 2018

Submitted by Ldinlove on January 11, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:09 min read
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