Analysis of I missed it, consolation I mean.

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



We met over
Sandwiches and ice water.
Did this often on Tuesdays.
He the Realtor
And I the Lawyer.
Peter.
Italian background.
Lots of funny stories
Or quips.
Wife Cathy was Food Economist
With the Province.
We had helped
Each other.
Clientele.
Referrals.
A pause came
To our lunch.
Awkward and uncommon.
Pete looked down at his sandwich
Sighed…
But I just rambled.
With trivial stuff.
He re-started his engine.

(It would be weeks before I learned
That he was being examined
For work ethics.
Also that he was in a
Cash flow nightmare.)
Deserved much better
He did.
And I was not
Immune to such difficulties.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1000110 111011 10100 01010 10 0101 111010 11 110110100 1010 111 110 01 010 011 1101 100010 1111110 1 11110 11001 1110110 11110111 11110010 1110 1011100 111 01110 11 0111 01111000
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 611
Words 127
Sentences 19
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 9
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 239
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Written on February 08, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 08, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 08, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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