Analysis of I want to be loved, today



I want to be loved, today
Be happy and gay, in a way
Feel the sun through these walls, and pray:
I want to be loved, today

I want to be loved, today
Share mind with the doves, and say
As the flowers sprout into this world:
I want to be loved, today

I want to be loved, today
From the people who pass by, no sigh
Be seen like a star in the sky.
I want to be loved, today

I want to be loved, today
Let the haters walk away
And the dangers avoid me.
Hey!, I'll say:
I want to be loved, today.

I want to be loved, today.
Be comforted in my own skin
Not worry about being thin
I want to be loved, today

I want to be loved today
Let nothing bad influence my state
Be joyful in my own fate
I want to be loved, today


Scheme AaaA AaxA AbbA AaxaA AccA AddA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11001001 10111101 1111101 1111101 1110101 101010111 1111101 1111101 101011111 11101001 1111101 1111101 1010101 0010011 111 1111101 1111101 11000111 11001101 1111101 1111101 110110011 1100111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 714
Words 165
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on February 07, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 07, 2023

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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