Analysis of A deal for a driver



Please, do not neglect me
When feeling sleepy starts to creep in
Then you pass out as I have been
Just for a fraction of a second!

You feel adrenaline,
You are awakened
While feeling chill along your spine
Do NOT ignore that warning sign!!!

Be SCARED, I am begging you
Singing out loud
Will help a lot! No doubt!

The moment it is safe,
Pull over on a side
Don’t question yourself,
You could have just died

Ten minutes you will sleep, no more
Then rested continue your trip,
I have done it before
              ***
I see you waking up alive and making it!
Arriving on time is a deal, will you take it?

- Topiya, Muses, and Andrusha Smyk, 2022


Scheme XAAB XBCC XXX XDXD EXE FF X
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 110101110 11111111 110101010 110100 11010 11010111 11011101 1111101 1011 110111 010111 110101 11001 11111 11011111 11001011 111101 1 111101010101 010111011111 110011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 649
Words 136
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Submitted by Andrei_Smyk on February 05, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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