Analysis of contention



my prison has a nice view
a smoldering coal mine
glowing the night sky
I can leave anytime
no keys in these doors
far below in the street
seems like everyone can

strange kind of happiness
this sense of freedom
I get it sometimes;
it's in our veins to fight chains
waiting for better weather
to hoist the sails, maybe
time to go dig up those
long-buried treasures


Scheme XXXXXXX XXXXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1101011 010011 10011 11110 11011 101001 11101 111100 11110 11101 10101111 1011010 110110 111111 11010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 365
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 8
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

Just a reaction to a feeling. Painted as beautifully as I could.

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Written on 2022

Submitted by eugener.13042 on February 04, 2023

Modified on April 19, 2023

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