Analysis of I still breath without her.



The sky is blank today
So smooth and white
No stories to tell what may
Rain; snow; hail; ravenous lightning
hidden in its fluffy tray
Then my first guest
A great tit whisping around like hay
 in blue skies
Invisible snowmen sit beside my feet
Too big for endless cuddles now
I still breath without her.


Scheme ABACADAEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 1101 1101111 11110010 1001101 1111 01110111 011 0100110111 1111011 111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 303
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 242
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Written on January 28, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on January 28, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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