Analysis of FEET KEEPT MOVING

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



There was a time that it seemed that I kept stepping into shit or something that wanted to keep me still. the doctors said here boy have another pill because we have many more if that one does not work it is really hit or miss and be sure to drink water because you will need to piss.

All the mistakes that I have made were mine to make on my own and now I found my way back home. the music plays a different type of song now and I no longer chase the band with quarters in my hand.

Now I find something that they say that I could never have. they continued to sabotage me but my feet kept moving and growing. you can not beat a man that does not know the meaning of defeat


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Metre 1101111111100111101101111010111101010111101111111111011101111100111111 1001111101111110111111101010100111101110101110011 11110111111101101011011111100101111011111010101
Characters 675
Words 143
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 176
Words per line (avg) 46
Letters per stanza (avg) 176
Words per stanza (avg) 46

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Written on January 21, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on January 21, 2023

Modified by Oakley on January 21, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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