Analysis of If I Had One Wish
If I had one wish
I'd wish for you,
To see yourself through my eyes
If just for a moment or two.
For if you could see yourself
The way that I do.
You'd never have any doubts
Of the things you're capable to pursue.
You would never again wonder
If your best was good enough,
Or worry about someone else approval,
Because really people just suck!
Your self confidence would soar
A smile never to leave your face.
Your aura impenetrable
With good energy never displaced.
You'd never question your self worth
Or if you belong,
ou'd have no more insecurities
And know that you're incredibly strong.
This life would never intimidate you
Not in the least.
The world in the palm of your hands,
Limitless are the heights you could reach.
The people that surround you
You'd trust with all your heart.
Cause you wouldn't surround yourself with those
Whom secretly hope to watch you fall apart.
My loves, my life, my awesome kids
If only you could see,
This world is yours
With all its benefits to reep.
Love who you are!
With everything that you have!
You are such amazing young people,
Far more great than I ever could have asked.
When you look into the mirror
Try to see yourself through my eyes.
You are flawless and perfect
Your only limit is the sky.
Love yourself fiercely
Don't you ever entertain self doubt,
You take this life head on
Letting nothing and no one change what you're about.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 1111 1101111 11101011 1111101 01111 1101101 1011100101 11100110 1111101 1100111010 01101011 1110011 01101111 11001000 111001001 11010111 11101 11110100 011101001 111100101 1001 01001111 100101111 0101011 111111 1110010111 11001111101 11111101 110111 1111 11110011 1111 110111 111010110 1111110111 11101010 11101111 1110001 11010101 10110 11100111 111111 101001111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,383 |
Words | 278 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 44 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,093 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 253 |
About this poem
This poem I wrote for my 2 amazing children.
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Written on October 07, 2020
Submitted by candimandy6 on January 20, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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