Analysis of What Kills Me The Most



-What kills me the most

The fall was the hardest I’ve ever had
The pain was the deepest I’ve ever felt
To be so true without a thought of doubt
It seemed to be taken away as easily as it came
Our love is one ,our battles are another
Distinguishing the two was only half the struggle
No matter what side we took it separated us from eachother
From the words said in vein acted as swords and knifes cutting and stabbing our hearts in a million ways
Even with the pain and hurt one truth always remained
The love we found was something that could never be restrained
Through it all our pain only amplified
The damage done was enough to shatter the coldest of hearts
With time and distance that never healed us back together
Our passion and attraction always seemed to captivate a new hello
A second chance it seemed to be with no lesson  learned
Again and again the the same elements made the result
What was once a place of grace and magic turned into a place of torture
Two worlds pulled apart
For the best we could say
Time does not heal all wounds
growth within kills the person i was
Molding the man you need today


Scheme X XXXXAXAXBBXXAXXXAXCXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 0110101101 0110101101 1111010111 111110011100111 1011110101010 0100011101010 11011111100111 1011011011011001010100101 101010111101 01111101110101 1111011010 010110111001011 11010110111010 10100010111100101 0101111111101 010010011001001 111011101010101110 11101 101111 111111 101101011 10011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,140
Words 233
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 22
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 450
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Submitted by Reytorres4695 on January 20, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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