Analysis of Ostrich, So Silly

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Did Creator goof with this one?
Scatter-brain
Sanding over eggs
Large eggs
Then leaving them.
To heat and hunters.
No maternal attachment.
Same thing again when
Bruno winks at her
And gives chase next year.
God chose illustration here.
Warning here
Lack of fidelity.
Lack of determination.
Do what feels good always.
Referenced in Job’s Bible Book.
Chapter 39, it was.
Much unlike that Warhorse
Also referenced.
Both magnificent runners, but…


Scheme ABCCDEFGHIJJKALMNCOP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10101111 101 10101 11 1101 11010 1010010 11011 10110 01111 110101 101 110100 110010 11111 10001101 1011 10111 10100 10100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 446
Words 83
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 355
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Written on January 08, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 08, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 08, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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