Analysis of Whispered Into Afternoon

Georg Trakl 1887 (Salzburg) – 1914 (Kraków)



Sun of autumn, thin and shy
And fruit drops off the trees,
Blue silence fills the peace
Of a tardy afternoon’s sky.

Death knells forged of metal,
And a white beast hits the mire.
Brown lasses uncouth choir
Dies in leaves’ drifting prattle.

Brow of God dreams of hues,
Senses madness’ gentle wings.
Round the hill wield in rings
Black decay and shaded views.

Rest and wine in sunset’s gleam,
Sad guitars drizzle into night,
And to the mellow lamp inside
You turn in as in a dream.


Scheme AXXA BXXB CDDC EXXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1110101 011101 110101 1010011 111110 0011101 111110 1011010 111111 1010101 101101 1010101 101011 10110011 01010101 1101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 480
Words 90
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Georg Trakl

Georg Trakl was an Austrian poet. He is considered one of the most important Austrian Expressionists. more…

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