Analysis of Intercourse

Nancy DaCorsi 1977 (California)



You are a rising flower,
Gleaming in the sun
Stretch your stem for first drink,
I'll wait until you're done
For I am the butterfly,
I do my dance for you
I ask to search your petals,
To taste your honey dew
Spread my wings so wide,
Then close them as I flirt
You, standing erected,
My tongue I now insert
Softly sip your nectar,
So sweet upon my lips
Feel my satisfaction,
As your stamen starts to drip
My legs bracing you open,
Until I drink you dry
Sprinkle you with wing dust,
And then away I fly


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHIHAJBKBDLD
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1101010 10001 111111 110111 111010 111111 1111110 111101 11111 111111 110010 111101 101110 110111 11010 111111 1110110 011111 101111 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 388
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Written on December 07, 2022

Submitted by nancydacorsi16 on December 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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