Analysis of The Rats

Georg Trakl 1887 (Salzburg) – 1914 (Kraków)



The hunter’s moon cuts straight through the farmyard.
From the roof’s edge a shadow descends.
The window empties itself without a word.
Up the stairs, below one’s breath, the rats cavort.

And the scuttling whistles here and there
and the grizzly whiff of your human stink
gives you away,
the ghost in the moonlight trembles through and through

and their bottomless greed tugs at you
and the houses and barns comply,
pregnant with corn and fruit.
In the dark out there the icy wind thrashes and weeps.

Translated by Eric Plattner

In Hof scheint weiß der herbstliche Mond.
Vom Dachrand fallen phantastische Schatten.
Ein Schweigen in leeren Fenstern wohnt;
Da tauchen leise herauf die Ratten

Und huschen pfeifend hier und dort
Und ein gräulicher Dunsthauch wittert
Ihnen nach aus dem Abort,
Den geisterhaft der Mondschein durchzittert

Und sie keifen vor Gier wie toll
Und erfüllen Haus und Scheunen,
Die von Korn und Früchten voll.
Eisige Winde im Dunkel greinen.  


Scheme AXXB XXXC CXXX X ADAD BABA XDXD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 010111101 10110101 01010010101 10101110101 0010010101 0010111101 1101 010011101 011001111 00100101 101101 0011101011001 01011010 0111111 111011 110111 111111 1111011 111111 1011101 11111 1111111 111111 1111111 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,050
Words 166
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Georg Trakl

Georg Trakl was an Austrian poet. He is considered one of the most important Austrian Expressionists. more…

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