Analysis of Desire
On a windy evening,
I am back again to meet her.
She is up there, and
I am down here looking at her eyes.
She is not the same as the day we met for the first time.
She is not smiling at me as she did the day I touched her for the first time.
She is not as beautiful as the day I felt her fragrance for the first time.
She is blue, disturbed, and has something to tell me, but then she keeps silent.
I am confused.
Is she doubting my love for her?
Is she not going to hug me like before?
Is she going to leave me and my love?
No, you won't.
Because
I love you every day and night.
I love your unpleasant voice and ugly face.
I love you because you are who you are.
I love you because no one has ever made me feel the love like you have.
So why are you silent, my love?
Hearing that, she cried.
And those eye drops made me feel that love, that warmth, and that smell.
Yes, she loves me a lot more than I love her.
And she will keep doing it even if I forget her.
I love you, rain.
Scheme | ABCDEEEFGBHIJKLMNOIPQBBR |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101010 11101110 11110 111110101 11101101111011 1111011111011101011 1111100101110101011 111010110111111110 1101 11101110 11110111101 1110111011 111 01 111100101 11101010101 1110111111 111011111011101111 11111011 10111 01111111111011 11110111110 01111011011010 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 979 |
Words | 231 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 735 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 210 |
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Written on December 06, 2022
Submitted by inbox2anu on December 19, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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