Analysis of A Weed Grown Through Concrete



Sprouted through a narrow channel,
Squeezed along the way.
Thirsty, withered, rooted shallow,
Reaching for the day.
Pushing upward,
No retreat,
A weed grown through concrete.

Now above the solid ground,
Triumph won through pain,
Exposed to eyes that only see
The glory of a stain.
Nearly crushed by passing feet,
A weed grown through concrete.

Stunted, tilted, leaves are split,
Somehow standing still.
Wonders at the purpose
Of the breaking of its will.
Bending forward in defeat,
This weed grown through concrete.

Then tiny feet come walking by,
Tiny fingers pull.
She carries home a flower,
A little heart is full.
All the bitter turns to sweet
For a weed grown through concrete.

Every plant can have two names,
A blossom and a weed,
But every one is precious
To the planter of the seed.
Petals, thorns,
We are complete.
All of us are flowers grown through concrete.


Scheme xaxaxbB xcxcbB xdedbb xfxfbb xgegxbb
Poetic Form
Metre 10101010 10101 10101010 10101 1010 101 011101 1010101 10111 01111101 010101 1011101 011101 1010111 1101 101010 1010111 1010001 111101 11011101 10101 1101010 010111 1010111 1011101 10011111 010001 11001110 1010101 101 1101 1111101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 877
Words 180
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

A deep thought while sweeping the driveway where a little yellow-headed weed had struggled up through a nearly invisible crack, appearing as though it had indeed grown straight through the concrete. My daughter only saw a pretty flower made all the more beautiful by its starkness against the lonely gray slab.

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Written on November 25, 2022

Submitted by BCByron on December 01, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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B.C. Byron

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