Analysis of FILL AND THROW PEE



When I hear some say philanthropy
What comes to mind is villains trophy
For them to fill and throw pee
At you and me  as we feel an atrophy

These showers of golden trinkets enjoy splashing us in their golden shower
For more wealth on top of wealth is an acquired sickly rich taste for power   
Unelected few proclaim selves' "elite" suffer a severe narcissistic disorder... vanity
Strutting about as though chosen from above by an all seeing, all knowing divinity

Considered charitable donating within their own foundation
Co in side with tax free extremely profitable self promotion
Many that tried aid found it tired aid for being tied aid
Proposed destiny shunned for corporate destination laid

Those devils who man are tearing into every and anything without concern
Viewing a life as no more than a commodity from which they seek to earn
The poor treated poorly, as rags to richest of people controlling this world
Undermined sent like rats to reaches far below see soiled wealth unfurled

The mentally shackled dig up riches from pits into which they were thrown
Under privileged GDP pillaged then receive returns as a high interest rate loan
Donut donations going around back to jammy donator dodging paying duty  
On the face of it they make up foundations to mask this beast as beauty

Foe offers faux aid a continent doesn't want, just need to escape colonial smite
Just be left alone with no more foreign coups, puppet leaders or capital flight
Found nations exploited but without them world economies would collapse
So I question who is really the needy, possibly the pilferers... perhaps?


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Poetic Form Quatrain 
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Characters 1,606
Words 280
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 54
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Modified on April 10, 2023

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