Analysis of consumed

azdi404 1967 (california)



in my highs & lows   
I felt the shivers   
that anchored me   
so unmistakably in your appetite.

I gazed at the November sun  
burning up like the inside of me quietly  
slave to love without affinity  
mistaken my ability  
damned me  
framing time when you’re here  
arduous answers to simple questions.  

in a crimson color pool
3D deep wallpaper  
where I swam for the remission  
in the intervals of its waves  
in the seams of breathing  
I acknowledge silence spoke to me somehow.


Scheme XXAX BAAAAXX XXBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 11010 1101 101000110 11100101 101100111100 111010100 01010100 11 101111 1001011010 0010101 1110 11110010 00100111 001110 1010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 520
Words 90
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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Written on November 19, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 02, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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