Analysis of He awakened me



writing in my journal
i found a big betrayal
i blamed her,gave her guilt
he awakened me,how i felt
my mind gave me a wrong vision
he lead me to fall in depression
i was the wrong one
i was the overthinker
she was honest
i destroyed the nest
the love was legitimate
she got the incriminate
i want to apologize
texting he is it wise
i turned my back first
i`m in a deadly thirst
my soul is betrayed
from its master who blamed


Scheme AABCDDDEFGHIJJKKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 100110 1101010 11101 1010111 11110110 111110010 11011 1101 1110 10101 0110100 110010 111010 11111 11111 100101 11101 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 423
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 337
Words per stanza (avg) 85

About this poem

this poem is about the betrayal an the self disappointment of a guy who blamed his first love

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Written on January 01, 2023

Submitted by mslmehdi77 on December 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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