Analysis of Obescience to Eve



You are just rising with the dawn woken up
By the drowsy moon who is the sister to
The just concluded celebration of the celestial
Bodies who had danced on the arms of the
Well known stars....you are  a rare gem but
Unfortunately you don't know yourself but you
Had a foretaste of the apple from the garden of
Eden where Eve has been deceived by king crawler......the Serpent!Even the blind could feel
The deceptive wink of the Liar who cherished
The act of flippant mischief.....at the beckon of the
Dust to dust,I picked the broken China of the sun.


Scheme ABCDEBFGHDI
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101101 10101110101 0101001010010 1011110110 11110111 010001110111 1001101010101 1011110111110111 001011010110 01110101010 111101010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 553
Words 107
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 432
Words per stanza (avg) 101

About this poem

This poem talks about the celestial bodies in relation to the feminine role in the affairs of life

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Written on December 27, 2022

Submitted by kemiogunniyi on December 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akinmosin Kemi

Kemi is a Lecturer in the Federal College of Education (special)Oyo,Oyo state, Nigeria. more…

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