Analysis of The Charm

Jake 1998 (Stockport)



My first love was,
awful,
I only desired her body,
Her external shape and mortal narcissism.

My second love was,
worse,
I only desired after her mind,
Her internal thoughts and social perceptions.

My third love was,
Intoxicating,
I only desired after her soul,
Her cosmological energy and divine touch.

Yet,
This last love I wish I never had,
For to have someone’s soul,
You are either a god or a devil,
And she helped sharpened,
My horns.


Scheme ABXX AXXX AXCX XXCBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10 110010010 00101010100 11011 1 1100101001 00101010010 1111 0100 1100101001 011000011 1 111111101 11111 1110011010 01110 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 450
Words 98
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I’ve been reading a lot of philosophical works on love as of late, and as a result I’ve looked back into my own past relationships with a more scrutinising outlook. This is my conclusion.

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Written on November 14, 2022

Submitted by jakelawler98 on November 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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