Analysis of My Untold Story

Daniel E Otero 1969 (Puerto Rico)



 My untold story only speaks words written with a weaken pencil, shatter dreams are no longer a surprise in my future. Loving myself no longer shines my mornings inspirations. My untold story has no moments, joyful smiles reflecting only on the day of tears. I am coldness without fear, why has my heart left my body.  The touch of my first love has no memories to immortalized words of kindness, the tocororo bird sang songs with meaning tonight. a beautiful sound. love everyday and every day loveable. Like the Arabian queen my love shields no more goodbyes just poetry, see them closely, It is the sound of courage, hear them near me,there are just tears of fearlessness. My untold story only speaks in ink form, read them near me, they are the bleeding truth that keeps my story beating.  


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Characters 801
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 633
Words per line (avg) 141
Letters per stanza (avg) 633
Words per stanza (avg) 141

About this poem

Is the painful strogle to keep loving a stranger.

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Written on October 31, 2005

Submitted by Lambdatp75 on November 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Daniel E Otero

Daniel Otero is a Puerto Rican Poet born in San Juan PR in 1969 by Dominican parents living in the United States. Transparent poetry full of pain and emotional experience. more…

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