Analysis of I am weak
I am weak.
Life is leaving my body.
My breath is tarnishing
In two waves of sighs.
My soul is bleeding
I am weak
I am drunk
From the ascension
Of alcohol which smells
Like the death of my
To be one day
At the museum of
I'm doing my last
Sign of the cross
I'm doing the last round
Of the rosary
I'm going to the
To dance my pain
In the ears of
So that when they are tired of me
They will narrate
The beauty of afterlife
Which smiles at me
Scheme | A b c x c A x x x x x d x x x b x x d b x x b |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 1110110 111100 01111 11110 111 111 10010 11011 10111 1111 100101 11011 1101 110011 10100 11010 1111 0011 111111011 111 010110 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 562 |
Words | 146 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 23 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 15 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 15 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 4 |
About this poem
A french poem I wrote that I got to translate. It’s a sad poem which talks about different confusing thoughts that cross people’s mind especially those who are dealing with issues.
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Written on July 28, 2022
Submitted by myrlandiemyrbel on November 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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