Analysis of HITSUZEN



There lived a boy,
His heart full of joy ;
Creativity yet to deploy.

For the crafts he made
He never wanted to be paid.

Skinny tiny kid beaten up everyday,
Remorse for his heart, tanned.

But a voice from within,
“Don’t hurt them back in any way!”.

Self centered in every way Soon he realized It was not okay,
Oh he used to sleep a lot !   did he say?

But something changed he used to say,
He fell for somethings in some way.

Dreams shattered with a blindfolded deceit,
Privacy and space he didn’t receive.

Grudge in his heart;

He used to share  what he used to fear,
Amongst all the tears
He learnt to face his fears.

Time changed everything but not his stubbornness;
For he couldn’t care less,
That he was a mess.

Some called him a Treasure for his skills
But no-one cared what he feels.

Everyday in Everyway ,
The Inner voice can be heard again.
But Its not repeating itself;
Perhaps there was something far more  noble about him.

How bold, He’d not let go!
Charging against the flow,
He’d not let go!.


Scheme AAA BB CX XC CC CC XX X XXX XDD XX XXXX EEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11111 01001101 10111 11010111 10101101101 011111 101101 11110101 1100100111101111 1111101111 11011111 1111011 110101001 100011101 1011 111111111 01101 111111 1110111100 11111 11101 111010111 1111111 10101 010111101 11101001 0111101110011 111111 100101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,106
Words 233
Sentences 17
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 3, 2, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on May 10, 2022

Submitted by sh20ptgn027 on November 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Snehasish Roy

Age -21 Student at Kaziranga University, Jorhat Assam Studying Bachelor of Physiotherapy Hobbies - Art, sports, Philosophy, workout  more…

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