Analysis of From My Journal

Caroline Shank 1946 (Chicago)



From Jim's Journal

I'm looking for my husband.  He has
disappeared into some place inside
his mind, like a sea creature slides
into a coral bed.

Quick now, here he is for a moment
or an hour.  Like a Robin bobs in
the yard, he is beautiful in his song
before he vanishes into the sky,
flying above or around me.

Are his pieces forever gone? Will
I find a kiss behind my chair meant
for me alone? Will my sorrow erase
the years of love?

I will be brave today.  Tomorrow
I will be the coral he needs. A small
animal in a very large and
strange ocean. .

Caroline Shank
5.4.22


Scheme X XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1110 110111011 01011101 11101101 010101 111111010 1110101010 0111100011 0111000101 10011011 111001011 110101111 1101111001 0111 11110101 1110101101 100001010 110 101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 584
Words 127
Sentences 14
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

M y husband had just died. I write poems quite a bit so this is why this entry is really a poem I am 75 years old. I live near Milwaukee, WI. I've been writing all my life. Thank you. For reading this. Caroline Shank

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Written on May 04, 2022

Submitted by caroline121946 on November 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Caroline Shank

I am 75 years old. I have been writing all my life. I live near Milwaukee WI. I have 2 grown children and 4 grandchildren..i worked as a health unit coordinator for twenty years. We moved to Florida for several years and there i was a Bookseller at. Barnes and Noble. more…

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