Analysis of blue meets yellow

Leo Feraco 2002 (ontario)



Must we confess so soon
Whilst robes are still sulking
And you haven’t got the change

Back home
In your closet full of blue
Are books of photos
Of a guise
you waltzed out of or through

Son you’re still mourning
The sheath is sealed
But firmly at your hip
To grasp at ease

You remind me of your mother
Or rather, you once did


Scheme XAX XBXXB AXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 111110 011101 11 0110111 1111 101 111111 11110 0111 110111 1111 10111110 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I wrote this poem after looking at old photos of myself before I transitioned. This felt very bittersweet.

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Submitted by feracoleo on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Leo Feraco

I grew up and still live in ottawa. I have been writing poetry since i was around 13. I also play the bass and really enjoy film. more…

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