Analysis of A version of me



A happy, silly girl I allow you to see
That's just another version of me
The mask that I wear hides the darkness, the sadness
It helps me to deal with all the world's madness
We all wear a mask at some point you know
It suppresses our feelings we don't to show
It's easier to swim in the shallows of the sea
Than drown in the oceans of anxiety
I hope my mask falls, I will finally be free
And be the version of me I want you to see.


Scheme AABBCCAAAA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 010101101111 110101011 011111010010 11111110110 1110111111 101010101111 110011001101 11001010100 111111110011 010101111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 433
Words 91
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 334
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

This poem symbolises the metaphorical mask we wear from time to time. To hide our real emotions, our struggles, to suffer in silence.

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Submitted by ladyjacoba01 on November 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jacoba Nieuwenburg

I've had a tough life, a survivor. I have just started writing poetry as a way to express my thoughts and feelings. more…

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