Analysis of A Line yet to Define



We lie in between;
the thin line, between friends and lovers
The line is fine, yet to define
Nothing can still fade away
Not me nor you
Why is the line so bold and fine
The air asking me, "what you doing"?
I said, "reading between the lines"
The mystic line thin and fine, yet to define
Don't know where it will take me, till the next valentine;
but, there's a line yet to define
Something we want, but cannot have,
something between love and lust,
something between a kiss and a touch,
Something between you and me...together still..not can be,
Yet we hover around finding something that isn't in our palm lines
Watching beyond the sky hoping stars change and you be mine,
In your arms, feeling divine there's a line yet to define.


Scheme ABCDECFGCCCHIJKGCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 011011010 01111101 1011101 1111 11011101 011011110 11100101 01011011101 111111110110 11011101 10111101 1001101 100101001 1001101111 111001101011001011 10010110110111 01110011011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 732
Words 145
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 567
Words per stanza (avg) 135

About this poem

It talks about a connection feels like love but is less than love.

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Submitted by jagrutikurhade on November 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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