Analysis of When Heaving On The Stormy Waters

Fyodor Sologub 1863 (Saint Petersburg) – 1927 (Saint Petersburg)



When, heaving on the stormy waters,
I felt my ship beneath to sink,
I prayed, "Oh, Father Satan, save me,
Forgive me at death's utter brink!

"If you will save my soul embittered
From perishing before its hour,
The days to come, the nights that follow
I vow to vice, I pledge to power."

The Devil forthwith snatched and flung me
Into a boat; the sides were frail,
But on the bench the oars were lying
And in the bow an old gray sail.

And landward once again I carried
My outcast soul, bereft of kin,
Upon its sick and vicious sojourn
My body and its gift of sin.

And I am faithful, Father Satan,
Unto my evil hour's vow,
When from my drowning ship you saved me
And when I prayed you guide the prow.

To you descend my praises, Father,
No day from bitter blame exempt.
O'er worlds my blasphemy shall tower;
And I shall tempt -- and I shall tempt.


Scheme XABA XCXC BDXD XEXE XFBF CGCG
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110101010 11110111 111101011 01111101 111111010 110001110 011101110 111111110 010111011 01010101 110101010 00011111 010101110 1110111 011101010 11001111 011101010 10110101 111101111 01111101 110111010 11110101 1011100110 01110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 830
Words 166
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Fyodor Sologub

Fyodor Sologub was a Russian Symbolist poet, novelist, playwright and essayist. more…

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