Analysis of Who gave you the right!?

Saffiyah 2003 (Harrismith)



You touched her!
Who gave you the right?
She's losing sleep at night.
Tossing and turning;
eyes burning from endless crying.
Barely making it to the next morning.
You touched her! Who gave you the right?
Making her feel less of a person, like she has no purpose.
Body shaking, her heart aching.
You touched her....
Who gave you the right?


Scheme ABbcccbdcAB
Poetic Form
Metre 110 11101 110111 10010 11011010 1010110110 11011101 100111010111110 10100110 110 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 71
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 260
Words per stanza (avg) 61

About this poem

*sexual assault

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Submitted by Saffiyahmoolla02 on November 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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