Analysis of Suicide



took his own life

He gave up mid-race.

Screamed for help, but in a world.

From people deafened by their own ego.

Nobody listened to you or tried to help you.

I had to learn to swim by drowning!

doing the right thing wrong

He had to pretend to be strong, but in the end

He surrendered to the arms of death.

The world was empty and cold and scary.

No reason, no color, no mercy, no love

Fears took hold of him.

He didn't commit suicide, they killed him!

Now, it doesn't matter anymore, the doors are open!

Cemeteries of a thousand graves open today!

A thousand and one here lies a common man.

He was passionate about life until it became

The cause of so many wounds.

People are like weeds.

They grow and kill the garden.

What's left for him?

Endless sadness and pain

He cut himself until he couldn't take it anymore!

He blamed himself for the sins of others!

Where were you when he needed you?

That's what he thought.


Scheme X X X X A X X X X X X B B C X X X X X C B X X X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11111 1111001 110111110 1101111111 111111110 100111 111011111001 101010111 0111001010 11011011011 11111 1100110111 1110100101110 100101011001 01001110101 1110001101101 0111101 10111 1101010 1111 101001 1101011101101 1101101110 10111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 975
Words 231
Sentences 22
Stanzas 26
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

It's the story of an ordinary person who got tired of everything and thought the only solution was death.

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Written on October 26, 2022

Submitted by agirlinlove on October 26, 2022

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:10 min read
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Samara Silva Dos Santos

My name is Samara Silva Dos Santos I'm 17 years old I'm Brazilian and persistent when I start something I go to the end, well I'm just one of billions of people looking for their place in the sun. more…

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