Analysis of Heavy heart



My heart was always looking for a love unconditional
This ends in selfishness
I find myself surrounded by solitude
Those who steal my clams says I'm insane.
I feel like I'm lost in the darkness
I am always attracted by the darkness
I always fall over in
I know I'm taking slow steps, but I'm not going back
If you're going to follow, follow my navigation.
They throw away my love like it was nothing.
It's never going to analyze it
I can sense your souls pure love
I think God empowers me to discover pure love
I sacrifice my love for their sake
My heart is made of Osmium


Scheme ABCDBBEFGHIJJKL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101010100 110100 111010110 111111101 111110010 1110101010 111100 1111011111101 11101101011010 11011111110 110101101 1111111 1110101101011 11011111 11111100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 574
Words 113
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 109

About this poem

This poem is based on bad relations, pain given colse person and losing himself.

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by arshadpatwekari on October 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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