Analysis of Heavenly Dreamer
I wanted to be far away from everyone
for a given moment, I flew in peace
looking for the distant infinity,
finding sweet, silent life
relishing entirety with a pure mind and heart.
I encountered that exquisite Heaven.
I can hear the rustling of the leaves
whooshing the wind from afar
A gentle stream babbles
Rain pitter patter
drips onto my chicks
the bluish-green Crimson Columbine flower
opened its three lobes and awakened.
Oh…Unbeknownst to me
it was late at night,
but I was under the sky
where stars shined
the stars smiled at me
I asked those stars to come to me.
The stars came as fireflies
They surrounded me
I danced with them
but the moon was angry with me
because stars left him to be with me.
Scheme | ABCXX A XXBDXDX CXXXCCXCXCC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011101110 1010101101 1010100100 101101 1000100101101 1010110010 111010101 101101 01011 1110 11011 0101101010 101110010 100111 11111 1111001 111 01111 11111111 011110 10101 1111 10111011 011111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 724 |
Words | 146 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 1, 7, 11 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 142 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem because I love to dream and stay with nature. it fills me with joyful thoughts. one day I will visit myself in the rain forest, and feel the smell of trees, and leaves to purify my mind.
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Written on October 22, 2022
Submitted by udaribopitiya on October 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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