Analysis of Heavenly Dreamer



I wanted to be far away from everyone
for a given moment, I flew in peace
looking for the distant infinity,
finding sweet, silent life
relishing entirety with a pure mind and heart.

I encountered that exquisite Heaven.

I can hear the rustling of the leaves
whooshing the wind from afar
A gentle stream babbles
Rain pitter patter
drips onto my chicks
the bluish-green Crimson Columbine flower
opened its three lobes and awakened.

Oh…Unbeknownst to me
it was late at night,
but I was under the sky
where stars shined
the stars smiled at me
I asked those stars to come to me.
The stars came as fireflies
They surrounded me
I danced with them
but the moon was angry with me
because stars left him to be with me.  


Scheme ABCXX A XXBDXDX CXXXCCXCXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101110 1010101101 1010100100 101101 1000100101101 1010110010 111010101 101101 01011 1110 11011 0101101010 101110010 100111 11111 1111001 111 01111 11111111 011110 10101 1111 10111011 011111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 724
Words 146
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 1, 7, 11
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I love to dream and stay with nature. it fills me with joyful thoughts. one day I will visit myself in the rain forest, and feel the smell of trees, and leaves to purify my mind.

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Written on October 22, 2022

Submitted by udaribopitiya on October 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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