Analysis of Break the Bias

Shivangi Premi 2022 (Shimla Himachal Pradesh)



Break the Bias!
The real stories are often untold, as the pages of history unfold. The lies, and heartbroken scenes, the pain and awful screams!
There are a hundred there are thousands, lying under the rug of meeting ends. They say I am weak and say this is how I should be. As long as I live, I should do as they please.
The second sex is my position nobody helps me fight this falsified conviction. Yes! I compromise, I leave everything aside. I am a woman, who is abused if I do not abide.
I refuse to live in disdain, with the spirit of motherhood, I will raise my head, with my willpower stronger than Snakewood. Because 'We live under the same sky' women are still underway, Oh why?
I cry for fairness, men, and women at par. Feminism is not biasness, not giving each other scar. Every gender is august, this critical thinking should prevail. Though broad-spectrum and humanity are still ill avail.
I talk to myself and say, “Oh Dear you are gracious and bold, hail to every human, kindness is your virtue.” But then they take softness for weakness, be strong, remember no one has the right to hurt you.
I’ll still break my silence and correct their sins, I am a creation of that holy kind, I’ll keep walking until I win. ‘Because we live under the same sky, gender equality should magnify.’
let us be the sun to every humankind, and not let the thoughts of inequality make us blind. After all, we are Humans, gentle and fine. Let’s make the world a wonderful story where we call forth each other to shine.
By Shivangi Premi


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,545
Words 292
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 119
Words per line (avg) 28
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,190
Words per stanza (avg) 282

About this poem

This poem is written for empowering woman. It sets the stage for what women in society today thinks and how the experiences from the past has led to the situation of women today.

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Written on October 24, 2022

Submitted by shivangipremi11 on October 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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