Analysis of Game of phones

Neil Mckenzie 1959 (Brooklyn Nyc)



"Game of Phones"

The mad king is not to be trusted...
He is starting to juggle his shiney objects...
Watch the weak ones fall under his spell, as he tells the strong ones to go to hell...
"I do as I please, because im the king"...
Now which one of my pawns wants to kiss my ring ?...
Who defys loyalty, i need to know...
Its off with his head will be his final show...
Its not what i say, its what i meant...
Hey im the king i will never repent...
Just then the king noticed all the republicans running...
Thats when Giuliani shouted "Hey Man"...
"Winter is Coming"...

(By Neil Mckenzie)


Scheme X XXXAABBCCAXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 011111110 11101101110 1011110111110111111 1111101101 11111111111 111001111 11111111101 111111111 1101111001 11011010010010 110101011 10110 11010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 589
Words 126
Sentences 13
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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Written on October 20, 2022

Submitted by jazztrumpet01 on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Neil Mckenzie

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