Analysis of Tomorrow not promised

Hasan 1980 (Peoria)



I’m so glad tomorrow not promised
All the stress I been going through
What good is a cell phone if I can’t get in touch with you
God said you have not cause you asked not and I know that’s not the truth
Cause I been praying to be your husband every since I laid eyes on you
I don’t have money
I only got one friend
My family don’t even fool with me but on the internet I’m the man
Dating a waste of time cause every body lying
The half truth not the whole truth so it’s still telling lies
No morals no character just actors on a stage
From genesis to revelation it’s a lot of words on every page
I’m so glad tomorrow not promised
I hope it all ends today
I’ve been trying so hard to make it and I’ve been struggling every day


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101110 10111101 11101111110111 1111111110111101 1111011110100111111 11110 110111 110011011111010101 10011111001010 0111011111101 1101100110101 110010101011111001 11101110 1111101 1110111110111001001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 757
Words 158
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 566
Words per stanza (avg) 149

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Written on October 08, 2022

Submitted by HasanM.Johnson on October 09, 2022

Modified on March 20, 2023

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