Analysis of The Room I Want To Live In

Ilakkiya R P 2007 (Chennai)



There is a room I want to live in
No humans live in that room; only our beautiful flies and mites enjoy there
I want to live in a mushroom
 where it is fully gloom
I want to add lights
So that it shines bright
I don’t need an umbrella when it shower
because my room has pileups with super power
I want to turn and live with flies
So that I would be small in size
To fit inside a mushroom


Scheme ABCCDEFFGGC
Poetic Form
Metre 110111110 11010111010100101011 11110010 111101 11111 11111 11110101110 01111111010 11110111 11111101 1101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 398
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 303
Words per stanza (avg) 82

About this poem

This poem is about mushrooms, their adorable shape, the happiness of its inhabitants and the poetess desire to live inside a mushroom

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Written on September 29, 2022

Submitted by mm_ravi on September 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ilakkiya R P

The poetess is a girl of 15. She loves writing novels , poems and short stories. She also has a great love for books. She loves painting, singing and studying. She’s a good public speaker more…

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