Analysis of The Mouse in Glasses
Krishiv Agarwal 2012 (Auckland)
Poem by Junior poet
Age 9 :)
The mouse in glasses
It was a fine sunny day
In the rabbit village of fa- ja meek -bay
Everything was perfect
Including the monkeys, who were walking erect
Then he came
All he wanted, he thought, was fame
The mouse in glasses
With a carriage full of cheese in masses.
He started ruling the country
He wouldn’t budge even for a cart full of brie,
And he made himself leader
Nicknamed himself The Kind - Deeder
Oh the mouse in glasses
Oh, oh, oh
The mouse in glasses
Oh, oh, oh
Roll out the red carpet
And don’t forget, never make a bet..
With the mouse in glasses
Cause’ he’s got cheese in masses.
And one day they came
The yellow foxes- bonne with incredible aim!
Then they broke down the gates at incredible speed,
And came rushing in taking care to trample each reed
The mouse in glasses came rushing out,
In the moonlight looking incredibly stout !
And for once all the rabbits of the cheered him on ..
For he had got his cart of cheese and threw it on the yellow foxes – bonne
And the leader screeched ‘Retreat’
We can’t have our treat of rabbit meat,
Their leader is too strong
We can’t stay here for too long.
Saying that they ran away
Never to be seen till this day
The rabbits had a meeting
And they declared 'leader' What do you want and he said 'a fine new cart of cheese for eating' !
Oh the mouse in glasses
Oh, oh, oh
The mouse in glasses.
Scheme | ax B ccdd eeBb ffxf BGBG axbb eehh iijj kkll ccmm BGB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011010 1 01010 1101101 00101011111 10101 010010101001 111 11101111 01010 1010111010 11010010 11110101111 0110110 101011 101010 111 01010 111 110110 010110101 101010 1111010 01111 010101101001 111101101001 0110010111011 010101101 0011001001 011101010111 111111110111010101 0010101 1111011101 110111 1111111 1011101 10111111 0101010 0101101111011011111110 101010 111 01010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,423 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 89 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
The mouse comes and start ruling the country of rabbits, fa ja meek bay. The rabbits at first think he is horrible as he nibbles cheese all day, which is absolutely loved .But he proves himself to be a good leader by fighting off foxes by making an incredible sacrifice....
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Written on January 02, 2020
Submitted by Krishiv on September 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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