Analysis of She couldn't be mine

Ayaan Akhtar 2007 (Lucknow)



It was a starry night,
The sky was filled with twinkling lights,
Saw her on my first sight,
She had brown and hazy eyes,
That made me hypnotise,
I thought of her day and night,
There was nobody left and right,
I was ready to sacrifice my whole life,
Knowing the situations,
I moved on without any expectations,
Because I knew that,
She couldn't be mine.


Scheme ABACBAADEEFG
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 011111001 101111 1110101 1111 1110101 111101 1110110111 100010 1110110010 01111 11011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 353
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 66

About this poem

Poet is about a person who has crush on a girl but find difficult to propose her

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Written on September 24, 2022

Submitted by ayaanaffan06 on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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