Analysis of POSITIVE CHANGE



Everyday we are given the chance,
To make a positive change.
Change of attitude to become a better  version of ourselves.

Be mindful of our wrongdoings,
Let not arrogance and pride disuade  us to admit that we commit sins.
Humility is needed for us to change.

Make peace our innermost desire,
Fill our hearts with love and care,
Let us learn to forget and forgive,
All  those who caused us pain.

What a beautiful feeling of relief,
To release the pain in our hearts.
Free from hatred and grudge,
Inner peace and happiness we got.

Like the wind, let our change be felt.
In our actions and good deeds.
Not to boast our  dignity and morale,
But  to glorify and honor our God.


Scheme XAX XXA XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101111001 1101001 1110101010101001 110110010 11100011110111011 01001101111 111010010 11011101 111101001 111111 1010010101 101010101 111001 101010011 101110111 01010011 11110100001 1110010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 710
Words 149
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on January 05, 2022

Submitted by dalenedolot on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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